Or Register for FREE!


Welcome to our Cat Forums!
Welcome to our CatForums!
You are seeing this message because you are viewing our cat forums as a guest.

You can continue to browse our many cat related areas as a guest but you are more than welcome to register and join our friendly community of Cat Lovers! ... And for free!

Doing so will also remove this message and some of the ads, such as the one on the left.

Please click here to register.

Reply

New Member
 
Cats owned: NA anymore
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: London, UK
Posts: 15
02-02-2009, 02:59 AM   #1

On call (dedicated to Luna)


I am aware of your calling, one day for me,
but so far for others.
Of the signs of sadness,
coming from those in tiredness,
with an unwillingness to live,
nevermore, as it is.

When a life does not longer belong to the living,
It’s escapes with our last breathing,
and helplessly contemplating,
can only respect it.

And as I hand to you those, I wish could keep,
In exchange, I am left to grief,
surpassed in pain.

I see the motionless of the yet living,
their shinny eyes, sore of seeing,
I hear their heavy breathing,
as their struggle to live, it gives them no life.

I understand…
It’s their energies drifting away, towards your light,
thus to re-charge.
And so my grief is also lifted from me, but in time.



Reply With Quote


Leesy's Avatar
Catsey Veteran
 
Cats owned: Maine Coons
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: West yorkshire, uk
Posts: 2,443
02-02-2009, 10:09 AM   #2

Re: On call (dedicated to Luna)


What a sad but moving poem



Reply With Quote


yola's Avatar
Catsey Veteran
 
Cats owned: 1 Persian and one b/w moo-cat mog
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Reading, Berkshire, UK
Posts: 12,771
02-02-2009, 10:29 AM   #3

Re: On call (dedicated to Luna)


That's lovely, but it brought a lump to my throat. A very moving poem.



Reply With Quote


angieh's Avatar
Catsey Veteran
 
Cats owned: Magnificent moggies
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Hampshire, UK
Posts: 21,718
02-02-2009, 11:03 AM   #4

Re: On call (dedicated to Luna)


Very eloquent.



Reply With Quote


New Member
 
Cats owned: NA anymore
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: London, UK
Posts: 15
27-02-2009, 02:25 PM   #5

Re: On call (dedicated to Luna)


Thank you everybody, for your good comments



Reply With Quote

Reply