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Socks's prayer.This is a poem I wrote for english class when Socks was in the vet hospital with the antifreeze. I made a really good grade on it and it and Socks was fine so it is a win/win for me  I was confused,afraid,upset and alone I had just lost my Mom to beer I had just lost my home. I couldn't cry I couldn't even see I couldn't even try I couldn't be me Then one day I got a call from the man who made me my all and on the phone he had said, "Ally get this thing or It's dead!" So, I went to his house and there you were The most cutest, the most adorable bundle of fur. Your eyes were yellow and your fur,black and white even though you were cute you kept me up the whole night. I bought you some toys that you just seemed to eat then you denied me when i gave you a treat The time came where you grew into a young cat Cuddled up on your tiny grey mat You were my Angel that came to me in need you gave me that ground that reponsibility. So yes, I called you my "baby boy" because that is what you were and that is what you still are. I heard my mom's cry from the kitchen. She then brought you in, You were lifeless, you were limb as if you were dead. A fear rose up within me and I pulled you into my chest I held you close and said "Baby boy, you'll be ok, just please stay awake." That's what you did, just for me. You tried your damnness to keep those eyes sparkling You held onto my shirt on the whole way to the vet and before they took you away I could of swore I heard you say "don't worrey Mommy, I'll be ok" Sitting there in the waiting room I was told you were dead So I just shutup and hung my head God gave you to my to make me happy but would god take you away if his goal was completed? Once again I was afraid,upset, and alone I had lost my cat to antifreeze I had lost my home. Then a gleam of hope shined through those doors when a vet came out and told us "His heart has started beating again." and then more. You were responding to treatment, You were playing with your cords You were even eating! Hell, you even scored! So I wait here now until you come home, because with you baby boy, I'm never alone. God gave you to me to give me a smile So I'll make damn sure You'll be here for a while.
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Socks, that is really, really good and so touching I had a lump in my throat  Well done!! |
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That is really very good you should think of writing more poetry |
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Very touching; I had a lump-in-throat too..... |
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beautiful! |
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beautiful and right from the heart  |
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Thank you all ^_^ I'm a teenaged girl so I usualy right alot I would be glad to post more ^^ |
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