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Phoenix
23-07-2009, 01:17 PM
I made this one up at about 11pm a couple of nights ago, can anyone think of a good title for it?

Once I had a loving home
Now I’m all alone
I watch as every day
People pass me by

Won’t you come and play with me?
I’m really friendly if given a chance!
I only want to play!

I’m only in here
Because my owner left me
I want a new person to love!
Can I come and live with you?
Can I share my love with you?

Please give me a second chance
I can see it in your eyes that you want to!
Why can’t I come and live with you?

HappyKatz
23-07-2009, 01:48 PM
Lovely Words RCR :) That poem makes you think & makes you want to adopt one of the precious animals who need a home :cat27 They all need love too! :smt049 Well done!
I am not good with titles but maybe My Second Chance or I need a second chance...

Phoenix
23-07-2009, 03:06 PM
Thanks HappyKatz - some of the rescues gave me the idea (was thinking about them)

dandysmom
23-07-2009, 04:40 PM
That's lovely; made me choke up a bit. Like HK's title suggestion!

Phoenix
26-07-2009, 05:13 PM
Whatever title I choose for it, could any rescues use it for their long term residents?